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Your grammer page is really good, has lots of words. Add more words on your Lexis as well.
Jonathon Swift page is also good, you can add a bit more about his life and all.
Your context of The Catcher in the Rye is really good, well detailed, and have all the factors of context.
Synopsis and Essay also looks really detailed as well which is good.
So Overall, your website is looking pretty cool!
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Hina
10/22/2012 06:23:15 pm
What Went Well: Your website looks very professional with a lot of detail.
Even Better If: Add grammer from Mr Ahmed's lessons and add more quotes to your essay.
Yo
Your grammar page has a lot of words which is good, add more words to lexis as well.
Jonathon Swift page is good and you have mentioned about the context during he wrote A Modest Proposal. You can add a little mroe about himself as well.
Your page on The Catcher in the Rye is really detailed. You have all the four factors of context and explained well. The Synopsis and Essay also looks very well detailed.
Just need to add Semantic Triangle.
Overall, your website is pretty cool!
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